Hello
I recently posted another type critique discussion (Cephalonia), where more info on myself and why I'm posting these typefaces can be found, so I won't repeat myself here.
The attached file shows where I'm at with a bifurcated serif display design, based of the LU petit beurre biscuit of my childhood!
I'm now hoping I can get some feedback to improve the design in general. I've constructed the glyphs from mono weight lines drawn in illustrator and one thing I'm wondering is whether I should taper the junctions with subtle ink traps on, for example, the V and W.
Myfonts have suggested a lowercase design, so I was also hoping for any thoughts people had on that. Places to start, stylistic elements to carry across etc?
All comments and suggestions are much appreciated!
Thank you
Pascal
I recently posted another type critique discussion (Cephalonia), where more info on myself and why I'm posting these typefaces can be found, so I won't repeat myself here.
The attached file shows where I'm at with a bifurcated serif display design, based of the LU petit beurre biscuit of my childhood!
I'm now hoping I can get some feedback to improve the design in general. I've constructed the glyphs from mono weight lines drawn in illustrator and one thing I'm wondering is whether I should taper the junctions with subtle ink traps on, for example, the V and W.
Myfonts have suggested a lowercase design, so I was also hoping for any thoughts people had on that. Places to start, stylistic elements to carry across etc?
All comments and suggestions are much appreciated!
Thank you
Pascal